“Don’t Take this Personally.” Four new poetry publications in Brief Wilderness–the space between.
https://briefwilderness.com/2021/03/19/dont-take-this-personally-by-patricia-l-meek/
BREATHE
I drove a hundred miles in the rain to see the earth breathe.
I drove a hundred miles
in the rain to see
the earth breathe.
In that moment
in the woods,
when the rain had turned the path into what looked like wet ashes,
I met myself meeting God.
I stood ankle-deep in wet ashes barefoot.
I drove a hundred miles in the rain to meet myself meeting God.
In that single moment in the rain,
I saw the earth breathe.
My feet were bare. I was cold.
I held on tight to a cypress knee.
I was barefoot when the entire planet inhaled.
In that breath,
in that breath
I knew
I was alive.
Trish, these are amazing. I need more time to read and re-read them (don’t take it personally) but really enjoyed them, you wise and witty wild woman.
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April 7, 2021 at 1:56 pm
Thank you Laura. You are too!
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April 8, 2021 at 2:53 pm
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Wow the part “I choose not to feel and consider it strength.” really illustrates how it feels to have a life wound. Such profound insight! Well done.
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April 7, 2021 at 5:04 pm
Thanks, Rachel. The poem came out of darker times.
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April 8, 2021 at 2:52 pm
Thank you for your prose so that we can feel alive, so that we can breathe with the earth.
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April 7, 2021 at 7:37 pm
Thank you! Nature heals!
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April 8, 2021 at 2:51 pm
Really well meaningfull and heart touching writting
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April 14, 2021 at 7:02 pm
Thank you so much, Divyen.
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April 16, 2021 at 1:49 am